1) Get rid of words like moreover, thus, therefore, may, fairly, additionally, etc

2)”The case scenario of one of the United States hospitals that were hacked, thus affecting a hospital’s activities for a week, is an excellent educational campaign awareness.”  add examples to support this statement

3)”The website prevents access to fake websites and websites harboring malware.” – this statement is vague- which/what website?

4)In the “Filtering of Suspicious Content” subheading ‘Blacklists’ word is used, before using such words explain what they mean so, explain what is a blacklist.

5)Under “Importance of Cybersecurity” subheading ‘Professionals who have pursued master’s in health informatics .. ‘ – instead of health informatics use something related to cybersecurity, add more intext citations

6)”Health insurance portability and accountability act rules (HIPAA)”- make this subheading and add how cybersecurity enforces HIPAA, add intext citations

7)”Large health organizations have fairly robust cybersecurity in the health programs to … ” this statement is vague

8)In “Health Information System” subheading add more evidence and in-text citations

9)”Strategies for Improving Cybersecurity in Health Facilities” change this subheading – sounds like am suggesting strategies. – add more intext citations

10)In “Ways to Identify Malware Attack” subheading – add more intext citations

11)In “Types of Malware” subheading – add more intext citations

12) Add more support, examples, and evidence to the paper.

13) The entire paper is lacking in-text citations. Make sure to add more in-text citations 

14)Add conclusion