Feedback from my professor: You’ve done a good job here overall! You’re certainly on the right track to have a strong p@per. Right now, this question is a bit broad because of the way the p@per is put together. I’m neither an editor, nor merciless, but I think that one place you could focus on for revisions is smoothing transitions between ideas both within and between paragraphs. Right now the p@per reads like it was written in chunks and placed together. I think this is where you should focus on revision in your body paragraphs.
Feedback from Peers: Could use more quotes is the main feedback.
First is a doc of the ess@y rough draft with my edits, please use this word doc.
Second is a pdf of the rubric
Third is another pdf for editing to make sure it will get an A.
Try to get the ess@y to 1,500 words roughly, can be less. DO NOT have more than 1,550 words please.
NOOOOOO Plagiarism!!!!!!
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