I received feedback from instructor. Please help in fixing and bringing down similiarity
Hi Angela,
You have a good general start here in this working draft so far. You offer a background in your opening paragraph that states who the company is specifically and how many employees, etc. are in this company. The tone here is professional.
As you revise, review the assignment over carefully for some of the main elements that are needed yet, such as the cover page.
In the paragraphs, be sure that each paragraph is developed and has specific details of support within it. Use your own voice and words to keep the report personalized. Be sure to cite any outside resource’s information in MLA in-text citation.
Review what stronger or more specific word choices might be offered instead of the ones pointed out so far. Use the most clear and concise word choices possible.
Delivering a high-quality product at a reasonable price is not enough anymore.
That’s why we have developed 5 beneficial guarantees that will make your experience with our service enjoyable, easy, and safe.
You have to be 100% sure of the quality of your product to give a money-back guarantee. This describes us perfectly. Make sure that this guarantee is totally transparent.
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